This is so adorable! And I like their proportions in this sketch. Much closer to how I envisioned them. A lot of people draw Tris so that she actually looks like she is a child, and I know she describes herself that way, but she is still 16. There is a difference between a small 16-year-old and an 8-year-old. Anyway, my point was that you make her look like a small 16-year-old, which pleases me greatly. Awesome job!
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